Some nations spend more
working and
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resultedAdd the preposition
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a more prosperous
.
,
jeopardizeChange the verb form
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having a healthy body and
goodCorrect article usage
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realationshipCorrect your spelling
relationship
relationships
with family. I strongly agree, that spending most of the
working has a tremendous effect on
's
.
Other
choose to spend most of their
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working without realizing the drawbacks.
, for others working hard means having a good
and
is`Correct your spelling
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the reason
ofChange preposition
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their motivation.
should consider that money is not everything and health is wealth.
, having s balance
is the ultimate goal.
, if a person
getChange the verb form
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sick sometimes the money is not enough to shoulder all the expenses.
Apart from that,
should not dwell much of their
in Change preposition
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working
ratherCorrect word choice
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spend it with their families. For others, no matter how wealthy is the person without having a
loveChange the verb form
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one'sUnnecessary verb
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it seems their
is empty. Human
beingFix the agreement mistake
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exist in many factors
as love, companionship and a sense of belongingness.
, those
neglectingWrong verb form
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their families despite
of Change preposition
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their wealth and capabilities to purchase
the Correct article usage
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material things are really not happy in
.
In conclusion,
working long hours would help the
economyReplace the word
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progress.
,
healthyCorrect article usage
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body and having
anChange the article
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happy
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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more important. I believe
,Remove the comma
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a
balanceChange the verb form
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is
theChange the article
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key to
in all nations.