Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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another
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people
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crashes and they can write out high fines. Use synonyms
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As a result
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On the other hand
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traffic
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however
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