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Nowadays, pollution and waste level are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? what step can be taken to overcome this problem?

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Climate change is a huge problem that's going to take all of us working together to solve. It's something that requires the cooperation of every nation and every citizen. No one authority can solve it all. It can be really hard to know where to start when it comes to fighting climate change, but every little bit helps. The issue is so vast, it can be really confusing to understand, especially for young people.
Moreover
, the scale of the problems can seem overwhelming,
whereas
 individual efforts almost feel too minute to count. That's why we created the Babui video series—to show children and young people how individual efforts can make a difference when it comes to climate change. These fun, informative videos will show how easy it is to make an effort – no matter how small you are. Do watch, get inspired, and take action to make the world a better place
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