The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories
The chart illustrates the volume of
country's
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the country's
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exports in different product types from 2015 to 2016 and the units were measured in billions. The table displays changing
proportion
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proportions
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in each product category between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, the tendency in every category of export experienced an upward trend over the period of time except in gems and jewellery.
However
, petroleum goods
are
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accounted for the highest in
this
country. Regarding
to
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the chart, petroleum is the most
exports
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, it was nearly $60
billion
and gradually increased
3
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% to approximately $63
billion
in 2016.
Nevertheless
, even though textiles have the least amount in both years, they have changed the most, around $26
billion
in 2015 and sharply rose 15.24% to almost $31
billion
in 2016.
On the other hand
, Agricultural exports
was
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around $31
billion
in 2015 and steadily went up 0.18% in 2016.
Moreover
, gems and jewellery were the only goods which experienced a downward trend, it was nearly $43
billion
in 2015 and dropped 5.18% to approximately 41
billion
in 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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