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'Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.' To what extent to you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Video
games
 become popular among youngsters. Some argue think playing
games
 is an activity that loses valuable
time
 in children's life and kids should not be allowed to play it. In my perspective, I totally disagree with the argument that playing computer
games
 is a wasted timely activity and must be prohibited from kids.
This
 essay will discuss the beneficial thing from playing video
games
.
Firstly
, the reason why
people
 think playing
games
 is an activity that wasted
time
 since playing
games
 can not measure the visual benefits compare to studying or reading books, it can measure when you have the ability to answer the question in the exam and rate into a score but the
game
 is can not. On the one hand, online
games
 have a lot of benefits that sometimes
people
 do not expect to get from them.
For example
, when
people
 are playing a
game
, their brain has to think and plan what they are going to do in that situation in the
game
,which means their brain will be more active when they
game
.
In addition
, video
games
 can help introverted
people
 to establish relationships with other
people
. Some introverted youngsters feel uncomfortable communicating with other
people
, some
people
 are learned English by playing a
game
 by communicating with a foreigner in-
game
.
Thus
, children can be sharing
time
 through the electronic system to connect with society might be easier.
To conclude
, I completely disagree with the position that kids'
time
 on computer
games
 should be prohibited.
This
 is because online
games
 can provide them advantages and represent a positive stimulus to learning activities but parents have to control them by giving them a limit of
time
 for playing
games
 so that they will not going to be
game
 addicts.
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