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In the past, buildings ofien reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar.What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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The architecture of building around global is found similar
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 scenario but during ancient times each model of
building
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 has created with thousands of stories. Even though wide range of technology
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, engineers couldn'
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forms
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 in the construction fields. The impact of traditional
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 well as modern ideas
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provided
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 in upcoming paragraphs. As
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ruling
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 by King, all architectural structure was
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 by human beings for
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 of years. During
this
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 to work under
warm
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 sun, often need to skip food and single forms of
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 were not used in all countries.
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, temples located in Hampi where many persons who not even graduated in planning or construction, under
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build
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 by using Hammers. Walls of temples made with sculpture
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will explain stories of ancient reality, currently symbolising
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exist
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. Even though earthquake and other natural calamities
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those architect
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at
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per studies.
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, these structures become
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tourist
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attraction
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 and
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getting
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huge
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 budget. After
19th
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 century, people were getting certificates
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 engineering and many inventions
has
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 done to support
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for
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easiest
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 way of
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. Everywhere,
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the building
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building
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buildings
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 were found
same
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 model and even though multiple
facility
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 available people couldn'
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earlier days.
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, in 20 th
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 dubai built different styles of buildings which
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 similar way and
incomparable
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were incomparable
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 with
ancients
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 development. If small signal variations in
earth
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,
startes
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starts
started
 to vibrate and get demolished itself.
This
 proves there is no validity
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 any of
modern
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 infrastructure.
Hence
, it brings major
drawback
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 to the public as per real experience. In conclusion,
tradional
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traditional
 forms of
architec
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architect
 overcome
from
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today's typical model of infrastructure.
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, technologies could help
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individuals
while
 working but
it
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 couldn'
t
 able to upgrade the
well graduated
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 engineers.
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