Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or short of money . Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that many
people
think that individuals should not fight against bad situations
, whilst others disagree and think they should try to improve their standards. This
essay agrees that humans should act and try to improve in these situations
.
On the one hand, Individuals with the will to act believe they should work more if they are in hopeless situations
. In everyday life, there will be problems
but besides
the difficulty of problems
, motivated people
tend to fix these problems
and improve their lifestyles by fixing problems
because that is
the way to become a winner
person. Jeff Bezos is a prime example, he tried to build a few companies before Amazon and they all failed. Replace the word
winning
However
, he never gives up and invents the Amazon and finally
became the second most rich man in the world.
On the other hand
, People
think that bad situations
are their fate that they should accept. It is wrong because these are just excuses for being lazy and they often say that life is not fair but the major problems
are these people
have no will to act and they believe that nothing can change. Despite this
, there are many people
who succeed in their journey with hard work. My parents are great examples, After they got their first job they worked so hard for a while
and to
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started
saving money for their own business. After a Change the form of the verb
start
while
, they succeed and become more wealthy in their lives but the key point is they are still working hard and never surrender to bad situations
.
To conclude
, Every person will have bad situations
in their lives although
the bad situations
people
should try to improve and eventually, they will have a better life and more money.Submitted by erenar3 on
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