The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and re-porting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and re-porting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the export value of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to Japan,
China
,
Mexico
,
Russia
and Saudi Arabia in 2010, 2011 and 2012.
Overall
, among the five mentioned countries, Japan had the highest value in 2010, 2011 and 2012
while
Saudi Arabia was New Zealand's least potential
market
. Meanwhile,
China
and
Russia
gradually increased
whereas
Mexico
had fluctuating numbers in each three mentioned years.
To begin
with, Japan had an upward trend from $271.100.000 in 2010 to $287.400.000 and hit a peak of over $325.000.000 in 2012.
In contrast
, Saudi Arabia gradually decreased from
year
to
year
. Particularly in 2010, the summary value of exports from New Zealand peaked at nearly $300.000, precisely $290.000 and dramatically fell down by $184.000 in 2011 and after a
year
, it decreased to $82.000.
According to
the given data, it is apparent that the three remaining countries had no significant changes. Specifically, there were upward trends in
China
and
Russia
whereas
Mexico
had a decrease between 2010 and 2011, after a
year
it slightly increased.
China
and
Russia
reached respectively $74.900.000 and $968.000 before going upward to $84.800.000 and $1.585.000,
then
continuously increasing to $94.000.000 and $2.404.000.
China
became the second largest
market
while
Russia
was the fourth
market
among the five countries.
Although
Mexico
's figures increased and decreased unevenly (dropping over $3.500.000 between 2010 and 2011,
then
marginally growing to $3.300.000 in 2012),
this
country was the third potential
market
.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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