Your friend who lives in another city has opened a new gift shop. You were unable to attend the inauguration due to an important competition you are a part of. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you must Congratulate your friend Explain your inability to attend Mention that you will visit soon

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Dear Ravi, I am ecstatic and elated to express my sincere congratulations on your new gift shop opening in Vancouver city. I am thrilled to be part of

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opening ceremony when I heard the news since

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is a much-awaited dream which is coming true. Unfortunately, I cannot show up at the inauguration function and I cannot even think of it in my dream of missing

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a fabulous day. As you know I am a crucial player in the football team and we need to play the final match competition which is going to be held on the same day.

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is going to be a lifeline to my career despite my low score in academics.

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, I am excited to come some other day to your place and if possible I will come in the month of March first week right after the final exams and we should have a great party. Please do not worry about any expenses and everything will be on me as I cannot come to the opening party.

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, let me know your availability and if you have a busy schedule please keep me posted with the dates. I cannot wait anymore to see you and I wish you very happy success in your new business. I look forward to hearing an update to

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letter with your available date. Best regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sun Feb 26 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

233 words

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Congratulations on the new shop
thrilled to hear
unfortunately
important competition
couldn't attend
rightly understand
looking forward to
visit soon
cannot wait to see

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