Your friend who lives in another city has opened a new gift shop. You were unable to attend the inauguration due to an important competition you are a part of. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you must Congratulate your friend Explain your inability to attend Mention that you will visit soon

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Dear Ravi, I am ecstatic and elated to express my sincere congratulations on your new gift shop opening in Vancouver city. I am thrilled to be part of

this

opening ceremony when I heard the news since

this

is a much-awaited dream which is coming true. Unfortunately, I cannot show up at the inauguration function and I cannot even think of it in my dream of missing

such

a fabulous day. As you know I am a crucial player in the football team and we need to play the final match competition which is going to be held on the same day.

In addition

this

is going to be a lifeline to my career despite my low score in academics.

However

, I am excited to come some other day to your place and if possible I will come in the month of March first week right after the final exams and we should have a great party. Please do not worry about any expenses and everything will be on me as I cannot come to the opening party.

Hence

, let me know your availability and if you have a busy schedule please keep me posted with the dates. I cannot wait anymore to see you and I wish you very happy success in your new business. I look forward to hearing an update to

this

letter with your available date. Best regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sun Feb 26 2023

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