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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The two pictures illustrate the differences between the current layout of an
airport
 and its expected transformations next year. It can clearly be seen that the redevelopment plan will enlarge the
airport
, and equip it with additional facilities.
Besides
 that, after the plan is finished, there will be more business activity happening at the
airport
’s site. First of all, except for the construction of a new car hire connected to the arrivals, the total floor area of departures and arrivals remains unchanged. In terms of the renovations to these two places, the single door will be replaced by a set of two entrances on both sides, and a coffee shop,
as well as
 an ATM, will be installed in the arrival area. In the departures, the locations of the existing check-in counters and the coffee shop will be slightly adjusted to make room for the introduction of a new bag drop area. No renovation work for the security passport control and passport control customs areas is presented.
However
, passengers can expect to see several new shops after they successfully walk through the security passport control in the renovated
airport
. In the meantime, the biggest adjustment to the current Southwest
Airport
 could be observed in the total number of gates and the way people move there. In detail, 10 more gates will be added to the existing 8, and a sky train will displace the current walkway, which is expected to accommodate the convenience of the passengers when they walk lengthened path leading to these gates.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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