A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: apologise for it explain what you are doing on that date suggest to him/her an alternate time to come

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Dear Dhruvi, I hope that you are doing well and enjoying your summer break. I writing in response to your letter about your vacation in India

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a few days with me. First of all, it's unbelievable that you are coming to India but unfortunately, I will not be able to meet you in the week of 2nd

June

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Therefore

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, I am really sorry from the bottom of my heart that we won't be able to spend time together. I have an appointment with a consultant in another town during the week of 2nd

June

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due to

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unforeseen circumstances in my business.

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, I am spending a lot of time in meetings to resolve several issues in it. Perhaps, we should meet in the week of 9th

June

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and you will probably be excited to hear that your favourite musician Tylor Swift will be performing live in my city on the 12th of

June

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. And I really hope that we go and enjoy. Sorry for any inconvenience that

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may cause you and excited to see you soon. Warm regards, Ruchin Patel

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to maintain consistency in tense usage throughout the letter.

task achievement

Provide more details about how the change of dates might work for your friend.

task achievement

The letter shows a clear understanding of the task, providing both an apology and an alternative date.

coherence cohesion

The paragraphing is well-organized, focusing on specific ideas in each paragraph.

task achievement

The tone is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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