In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

#future #cars #buses #trucks #driverless #people #vehicles #passengers #diverless

Technological and innovation are very developed in recent

year

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. And, AI is the new innovation of technologies that helps people an

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easier and better

life

For example

, AI can control transportation by computers

such

as cars, buses, and trucks transportation will be driverless in the future.

Also

, I strongly believe that AI can change the type of job like a driver job because AI can do everything like a human. I think it is beneficial for humans in every nation around the world, and in

this

essay, I will write about

this

. First of all, AI can help humans control transportation when there are driving

for example

in some countries

such

as America or UK some companies use AI to drive a car on the road and people can control the car with a smartphone.

In addition

, AI can reduce

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on the road and save human

life

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, many companies and many businesses can save money

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paying the salary of the driver.

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, I have some points that

bad

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for using

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new technologies in business ,

for example

, some companies must pay a lot of money to buy AI because it is very expensive and it is a new innovation.

Moreover

, there must pay a lot of money to fix it too when it is broken. And another point that I am very serious about humans will lose their job because AI can do everything as same as

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human

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To sum up

, I always believe that AI has many benefits in human

life

and the modern world

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our

life

will be easier but

human

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humans

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around the world must develop themself about

the

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technology

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every day.

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