Is mental strength important for success in sports or is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In these days and ages, there is a debate related to sports discussed among
people
. Some people
believe that good mental health plays a key role in being a successful sport
player Change the noun form
sports
while
others claim that physical well-being is more important. In this
essay, I will give my own opinion and analyze both views.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that having stable psychology can significantly help people
have a
good performance. Correct article usage
apply
First,
when having a firm mentality, players
escape from panic and would be able to make ideal
determination. Take a national football match in Sweden Add an article
the ideal
for example
, although
the Swedish team was rated badly compared to the American team in terms of physical health, skills, flexibility… The Swedish players
still took the
advantage in the match and became the winner. Correct article usage
apply
This
is because they did not feel the sense of confusion which brought them great tactics and perfect cooperation among people
. Hence
, being stable may help players
promote their teamwork and performances
.
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performance
On the other hand
, physical health is also
highly concerned in many kinds of sports as people
need to have great strength and fitness to be successful. For example
, in a swimming match, competitors should be flexible and skillful
Change the spelling
skilful
as well as
have a strong body to reach their goals. If not having
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have
this
necessary condition, competitors may feel exhausted, tired and even being
injured during the match. Unnecessary verb
apply
That is
the reason why physical training is dramatically essential for all sport
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sports
players
.
To conclude
, mental and physical well being
are both worth considering. Add a hyphen
well-being
However
, I am of the point that psychology is more important as people
can improve their stamina through trainingSubmitted by luuvuthanhdat2005 on
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