Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Processed food and beverages containing an excessive amount of
sugar
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products
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an intervention in the cost of those Linking Words
products
may bring immediate wanted results, I argue that it is by no means the most intelligent choice.
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This
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sugar
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take in and, Use synonyms
thus
, negatively affect the revenue of the companies operating in related industries. When producing sweet food and drink is no longer lucrative, many companies will either be out of business or switch to other sectors. Linking Words
Such
a result will, in turn, affect the availability of sugary Linking Words
products
for customers.
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such
a way might not be the best approach to protect Linking Words
people
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products
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may be willing to pay a higher price for those Use synonyms
products
or resort to buying cheaper ones that are probably made of low-quality ingredients to satisfy their needs. Needless to say, abrupt and forceful intervention of the government in the commodity markets might result in disagreements among the citizens and negative consequences for the country’s economy. Use synonyms
In addition
, there is a multitude of other more serious causes of the current worrying public Linking Words
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as smoking, pollution, and a sedentary lifestyle.
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products
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sugar
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health
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sugar
by increasing those commodities’ prices is a considerable option. It is, Use synonyms
nevertheless
, not the most effective measure, so those in power should consider other possible methods.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite