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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the situation of using social media
sites
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 of
people
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 in Canada in the years 2014 and 2015.
It is clear that
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 in 2014 more
people
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 used a maximum of one Internet site
while
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 they have been used surfing on more than
two
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 Websites in 2015. 2014 saw 36% of inhabitants in Canada using only one site, followed by 23% of them having
two
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 networking
sites
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.
However
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, the figure for using one site dropped significantly in 2015, by 8%. In 2014,
people
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 using three or more
sites
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 were under 20% in total.
On the other hand
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, an
overall
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 increase in the proportion of
people
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 using more than
two
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sites
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 could be seen in 2015. Apparently, the percentage of
people
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 who use three social networking
sites
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 rose to 16%, compared with the figure of 12% in 2014.
Also
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, there were roses by about 2% in the population using
two
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, four and five
sites
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sites, people, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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