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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
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The provided diagram below presents general information about the
salmon
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's life cycle.
Overall
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,
this
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 process consists of 3 steps beginning with little fry growing and becoming smolt,
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, ending with adult
salmon
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 that lay out its egg.
Initially
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, the
salmon
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 eggs that are situated in the upper river (slow-moving) and among the reeds need approximately 5-6 months to cultivate to the fry.
Subsequently
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, the fry that has a length of 3-8cm will live in the lowest river (fast flowing) for probably 4 years. In the second stage, little fries become smolts.
This
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 smolt has nearly 12-15 cm in length. Afterwards, the smolt that lives in the open sea for roughly 5 years will get into the adult
salmon
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.
This
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 phase of
salmon
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 is the biggest and oldest one. The length of
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 adult fish is around 70-76cm.
Thereafter
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, these fishes will breed under the small stones where their eggs will grow.
To sum up
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it is clear that
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 the large fish called
salmon
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 has 3 phases of cultivating.

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