The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter, say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party explain why you won’t be able to attend the party give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr and Mrs Collins, I am very glad about to

inviting

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me to

Chris

's surprise

birthday

party

Chris

and I celebrated a lot of

birthday

celebrations together.

Therefore

I realized that

this

surprise

birthday

party

will be enjoyed him. Because he is a very sensitive and innocent person I am never met. But sad to say, I will not able to attend

this

party

, the reason for

that is

my bachelor's degree final exam date same as

Chris

birthday

, if I postponed my exam to the future, it will be a huge burden for my career. That's why I can't postpone my exam.

Furthermore

, my exams end within two weeks, and after,that I have three weeks' vacation, it will be supported me to plan to see

Chris

, and don't tell about that to him, I already bought a gift for him,

then

I plan a small surprise to

Chris

from myself. I hope you understand my situation and I am extremely worried about the non-attendance of

Chris

birthday

party

. Will we meet as soon as possible Yours faithfully Asanka

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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