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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Agriculture has become an important investment area and an essential part of daily life.
It is clear that
 improvement in
this
 sector leads to product diversity and increased quantity.
Although
 advances made in cultivation, some people around the world still go to starvation. There are many reasons for
this
 shameful reality. It is true that all
countries
 are interested in agriculture in
a
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somehow,
,
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however
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 there are only developed
countries
use
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 the power of fertilizers and industry. These are crucial for the annual production of vegetables and fruits.
For
example
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 the Netherlands are famous
with
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their
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 heavy industry and chemical fertilizers which are essential for developing food amount.
Hence
, food prices
in
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there
lower
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 than
poor
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countries
. If these
countries
 used an industrial modal like the Netherlands', they wouldn't be in
this
 situation.
Although
 not all undeveloped
countries
 have great industrial opportunities, some of them failed to improve their transportation overseas.
Thus
, these territories couldn't export their products
with
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 other nations. It is true that exportation and importation affect each other. Neglected importation
result
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 in increased prices in all
kind
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 of sectors,
therefore
 poor people can't reach cheap meals easily. To canalize their resources for transportation and importation may decrease crops and meal prices slightly in undeveloped
countries
.
Also
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 they should
try
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 make a trade agreement with their neighbourhoods. In conclusion, many people around the world still confront
to
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starvation. Some of
them
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 opinion that
this
 is their destiny. But in
reality
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 there are many solutions to solve
this
 problem.
Last
 but not least
countries
 should try
to
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different modalities to gain access to cheaper foods.
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