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some people view the conflict between teenagers and parents as a necessary part of growing up, while others view it as something negative which should be avoided. discuss both views and give your own opinion. five reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowloedge or experience.

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Teenage is an important phase in every human's life and cannot be ignored, as children in
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 period start to mature and a lot of changes take place between the age of thirteen and twenty-one respectively. These changes can include a teenager having conflicting thoughts and ideals with their
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 which can turn out to be a negative or a healthy interaction which
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 strengthens the parent and child's bond.
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, a lot of
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 understand and believe that the interaction between teenagers and their
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 is a necessity regardless of whether it has a negative or a positive effect.
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, many
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 have a better understanding of their children as they grow and become an adult, just because of the conversation that both sides had in past about their likes, dislikes and ideals.
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 might be one of the reasons why people think conflicts between
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 and offspring are essential. There are other reasons which include the teenager expressing his or her feelings to their guardian, and a dispute increases the chances of conversation among them,
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 get to know about the preferences of their child. I indeed disagree with people who try to avoid or ignore the conflict which
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 results in
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 knowing very little about their teenagers.
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 in the long run places children in a vulnerable position where they don't share their problems with their guardians
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 distrust. People do have their own opinions and view about
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 problem. but, I believe that it's crucial to have some kind of interaction between
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 and their teenage kids
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 the reasons mentioned above.
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