Some People believe that only the strongest individuals and teams can succeed in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the
sports
fields
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,fields
people
share different opinions about attaining achievement (making progress). A certain amount of people
claims
that succeeding in a sport is possible only for the strongest teams or characters , Correct subject-verb agreement
claim
while
others believe in the champion mentality that leads them to a
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apply
success
.
On the one hand , being talented or strong is base of promotion in certain fields like sports
.It is said that only the strongest can achieve success
, accordingly
the weak haven’t place
in a Change the verb form
placed
sports
society. For instance
, plenty number of five-star footballers are from Europe , whereas
it is hard to be a world-class player for Asians ,
because Europeans are really advanced in Remove the comma
apply
this
case. Finally
, it is obvious that human with strengths has ample opportunity to succeed easily.
On the other hand
, advancement can be attained by psychological factors such
as mental attitudes. People
can be successful only by their
mentality that doesn’t let them give up. It does not matter what you are able to do right now, what is important thing is that you have desire and motives. One clear example is Yan Blahovich , Change the pronoun
the
unexpected
UFC champion who never gives up even Correct article usage
an unexpected
anybody
believed Correct word choice
if anybody
to
him, and whose path to Change preposition
in
success
lasted more than fifteen years.
In conclusion ,although
both viewpoints have enough arguments, I believe that in the sports
field success
depends on mental attitudes. People
are able to get strength by hardworking unlike owning mentality and wishSubmitted by Deadline 8th April IELTS
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