Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people think that homeschooling

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is best for the

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's growth and development but there are some people who believe that the

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we shall discuss the advantages of homeschooling and attending

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. First and foremost, the advantages of being homeschooled are that the parents can monitor the

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and see how the

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develops and what subjects is the

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weak in and improve upon those subjects. The parents can

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manage the time schedule of the

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and give more time for activities which help the

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develop. Homeschooling can help the

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develop in a safer environment which is vital for the

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of attending

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that the

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can learn to communicate with other

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which

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develop the

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's social skills. The

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covers a vast majority of

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which the

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learns

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as physical activities like dodgeball and basketball which helps the

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develop

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and studying chess with other

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helps the

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develop mentally and improves

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abilities. In my

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children

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should attend

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as it helps the

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develop many abilities and brings out

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potential

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certain aspects of

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to be developed.