The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the comparison of a university leisure

area

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in 1990 and the present. Generally, there are significant developments in some sports

courts

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while

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the cafe and reception have remained intact. First and foremost, it is evident that the outdoor pool in the north-east

area

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is renovated into an indoor one

whereas

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two tennis

courts

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located in the south-east have been reconstructed into a fitness centre and moved to the car parking

area

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in the south-west, despite being added two new

courts

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Similarly

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, the trees lying northwest of the map have been chopped down and the park opposite the car park has been flattened and replaced by a basketball pitch. Turning to the changing room, it can be seen that it has been relocated and extended next to the fitness square,

although

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the cafe and reception in the northern

area

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have been left untouched.

Furthermore

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, basketball and tennis

courts

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have been isolated from all other facilities.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, courts with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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