Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be banned in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of broadcasting
crimes
is arguable.
While
it is a commonly held belief that broadcasting
such
crimes
might cause
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adverse effects
for
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society,
so
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it must be removed. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with
this
statement.
This
essay will shed a light upon some of the reasons that made me disagree. On one hand, broadcasting
crimes
description should not be banned from
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as it can educate the public about the
crimes
that happened in their surrounding environment, so they will be aware.
For example
, if parents
heared
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heard
from the news that there is a certain crime
happened
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such
as child
raping
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, they will directly take care
about
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their kids and they will alert them
from
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such
danger.
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, people must be informed
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the dangerous incident around them, so they will take
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.
Thus
, it becomes apparent that publication
crimes
in the newspaper have
adavantages
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advantages
and should not be banned. Another point to consider is that
publicating
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publication
crimes
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details might advise people about different methods that
criminal
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use in their
crimes
.
For example
, recently most cyberattacks criminals used to send a link to
the
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individuals and fool them and once they open the link, they
steel
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all their money in the bank account.
Such
methods, the public will not know about it, unless the newspapers had published
this
kind of
crimes
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. Indeed,
this
makes it clear that
crimes
might be
usefull
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useful
to be
puplished
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punished
. In conclusion, the community requires more awareness and education. As
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education is the main way to tackle
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dilemma
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.
However
, publishing
detailes
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details
detailed
crimes
may consider a type of education to the public.
This
is because it might help in
increase
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public
awarenss
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awareness
.
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