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The given pie chart demonstrates information about the major reasons which affected three regions of agricultural land which are becoming less productive in the period 1990s.
Overall
, it's vivid that Europe worsened its agriculture caused
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 deforestation and cultivation. Turning to more detailed information in the whole world about 65% of degradation was from the side of animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30%
accordingly
.
Likewise
, 28% of degradation occurs
due to
 over-cultivation, and other reasons made up 7%. In the 1990s all of these reasons influence differently,
while
 deforestation consist of 9,8%,
while
 the impact of
this
 on Oceania and North America had a small amount about 0.2 and 1.7 per cent.In Europe, degrade with the largest
overall
 percentage of 23, there were
also
 treatments
due to
 which 7.7
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 were affected and overgrazing which
equaled
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 5.5
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. In Oceania, it worsened by 11.3
while
 North America accounted for the lowest share, which was 5
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 of all, and the biggest reason for
this
 was processing and to a lesser extent overgrazing, they accounted for the amount between 1.5 and 3.3
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