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The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
#three #show #changes #school
A glance at the three pie charts provided
reveal
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 some changes in annual
expendituring
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expenditure
expenditures
 in one of the schools in
UK
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the UK
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 in three decades.As it is clear,spending
money
 in all sectors has fluctuated during these years. The main sources of
money
,first of all,in the school
has
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 dedicated to
teachers
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teachers'
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 salaries with 40%,50%and 45% in1981,1991 and 2001 respectively.the second biggest proportion of
money
 spend
for
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on
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 other
workers
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workers'
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 salaries,during
this
 period,
has
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 slightly decreased between 15% and 28 %.
According to
 the pie charts,
school
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the school
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 has allocated
money
 for other parts
ot
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of
 its school
such
 as preparing
furnitures
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furniture
 and other
equipments
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equipment
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,at least in 1991 with 5% and
maximum
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with
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 23% in 2001.Meanwhile during
this
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 years spending
money
for
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on
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 some resources,
for
instance
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 books,was
further
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 point.that it had
changes
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changed
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,somewhere between 9% and 20
percent
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per cent
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.It is obvious,the smallest part of annual spending
money
 was related to
insurance
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the insurance
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 sector and it
has
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rose from 2% in 1981 to 8 % in 2001.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual spending
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenses
  • financial distribution
  • percentage
  • increase/decrease in spending
  • significant change
  • expenditures
  • comparison
  • trend
  • category
  • shift
  • saw a rise/fall
  • investment
  • allocation
  • predominant
  • minor
  • resources
  • prioritize
  • fiscal policy
  • capital outlay
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