Nowadays people like pets. some people think that
animals
are useful for humans and others
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the statement. In my opinion,
iChange the capitalization
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beliveCorrect your spelling
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that,
animals
are very helpful in our
day to dayAdd a hyphen
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life.
firstly
, people are using
animals
as a source of income.
For instance
,
animals
such
as ox,
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those Correct pronoun usage
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are
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to Change preposition
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farmers in farming manually. and
the cow which gives milk. there are many factories established in some countries which
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milk from
cowFix the agreement mistake
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and
. They transfer their products to
another countriesReplace the adjective
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and it helps
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growth of the country.
On the other hand
, micro
and earthworms
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as compost which
helpCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to grow the plant faster
than using pesticides. those
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damage our health.
when comes to health benefits ,
animalsChange the noun form
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meat
such
as goat meat and chicken ,egg,
fishCorrect word choice
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those Correct pronoun usage
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are containChange the verb form
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rich
vitaminsChange preposition
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and minerals,
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.
this
having food helps to stay away from many diseases.
for example
, eating fish can cure
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many heart
diseases. Many researchers suggest that
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cow milk
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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vitamin A which
helpCorrect subject-verb agreement
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in improving
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human
eye sightCorrect your spelling
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,
muscleCorrect word choice
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and bone development.
In conclusion,
animals
have many advantages to
which helps as
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money and food, health purpose, and reduce diseases ,
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of travelling. there are many
to protect
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animals
. It is our responsibility to protect them. they are very important to
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nature.