The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
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The diagram given illustrates several steps about how
water
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can turn into
electricity
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everyday
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in a hydroelectric
power
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station
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. At
first,
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we can see that
water
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, which usually comes from
high-level
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a high-level
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reservoir
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near a dam,
pass
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passes
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intake
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and
flow
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flows
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to the
power
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station
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.
Additionally
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, it can be clearly seen that the
intake
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is usually open in order to collect the flow of
water
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to generate
electricity
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during the
day time
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daytime
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. When the
water
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comes into the
power
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station
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, one part which has been transformed into
electricity
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is operated in a generator,
then
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delivering
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to
national
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the national
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grid through
power
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lines. The other part
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firstly
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pass
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passes
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the reversible turbines to arrive low-level
reservoir
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. The hydroelectric
power
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station
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also
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work
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works
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in
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at
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the
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apply
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night. The
water
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kept in the low-level
reservoir
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in the daylight is pumped into
high-level
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the high-level
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reservoir
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by reversible turbines. After that,
water
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will remain
pumping
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while
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the
intake
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is closed. When a new day comes, the
intake
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will be open again and all the steps will be repeated in the
power
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station
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.
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, all these steps show a simple procedure of transformations between
water
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and
electricity
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which happen normally in our daily life.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, electricity, power, station, reservoir, intake with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Penstock
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Transformer
  • High voltage
  • Renewable energy
  • Kinetic energy
  • Potential energy
  • Power grid
  • Sustainable
  • Flow rate
  • Energy conversion
  • Hydraulic pressure
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