The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the recycling
rate
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of four materials: paper & cardboard, glass containers,
aluminium
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cans and plastics, between 1982 and 2010. It can be noted that paper and glass were the most recycled elements for the period, but
aluminium
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was rapidly catching up with them,
while
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the plastics
rate
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remained distant from the first three. Analyzing the trends, it can be seen that the paper
rate
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was the most variable one, starting from 65% in 1982, arriving at 80% in 1994 and
then
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continuously declining, reaching a 70% recycling
rate
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in 2010.
This
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trend was similar, in the beginning, with the glass one, with a decrease until 1990, passing from 50% to 40%
rate
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, when a steady growth started, totalling a 60%
rate
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in 2010.
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aluminium
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, that in 1986, when the historical series started, was recycled only for 5% of the total, saw the sharpest raise of all the four categories, reaching 45% in 2010.
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, plastics, for which data are available only from 1990, saw a steady increase, passing from a 5%
rate
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in 1990 to a little less than 10% in 2010. In conclusion, it can be stated that these selected materials all had different trends in the considered time frame.
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,
whereas
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the most recycled ones saw a certain grade of maturity, with contained raises or declines,
aluminium
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saw a greater increase pace, which could be linked with the relative recentness of
this
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activity.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, aluminium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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