The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the proportions of the five main types of food sold in a supermarket in the years 2003 and 2013.
It is clear that
the changes in the percentages of all five types are not significant.
However
, there are still declines in the figures for
vegetables
and eggs,
while
some increases in the categories of fruit, seafood and
meat
can be seen. In 2003,
vegetables
were by far the highest proportion of
sales
, namely a quarter, closely followed by
meat
with 21%. 2013 saw a 4% rise in
sales
of
meat
and a 2% fall in
vegetables
,
thus
,
meat
overtook the position of
vegetables
as the highest-selling item in
this
supermarket.
In addition
,
whereas
in 2003 eggs accounted for 20% of
sales
and ranked in third place, in 2013
this
number fell to 14%, which is the biggest drop among all food categories shown.
By contrast
, the percentage of
sales
of fruit and seafood increased by 2% each within ten years.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetables, meat, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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