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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The line charts compare ownership of electrical
appliances
 and
doing
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housework
 time in
households
 in the country from 1920 to 2019. We can see that there were totally different trends both in the figure
of
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for
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 electrical
appliances
 and the time of doing
housework
 in
household
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the household
a household
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 over the period. The number of electrical
appliances
 ,washing
machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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,
which
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significantly increased
whereas
 the weekly
hours
 of
housework
 in
households
 fell
down during
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over
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 almost 100 years. It can see that the proportion of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 dramatically
rised
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rose
raised
rise
, by 100% from 1920 to 1980 and remained
100
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by 100
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% over the end of
this
 period.
Also
, there was
similiarly
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similar
 growth in the amount of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 which reached 100% in 2000 from 30% in 1920.
Accoding
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According
 to ownership of washing machine, it
steadly
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steadily
 increased from 40% to above 70% over the period in the city. When it comes to the
hours
 of
housework
 every week in
households
 dropped obviously, by 30
hours
 from 1920 to 1960 owing to the increase in the figure
of
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for
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 electrical
appliances
.
Additionally
, the
hours
 of
housework
 every week in
households
 slightly decreased from 20
hours
 to 10
hours
 between 1960 and 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words appliances, housework, households, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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