The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st Century.
The maps illustrate how the town of Lakeside changed in the early years of the 21st century
Overall
, this
town underwent some significant transforms
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transformations
due to
the redevelopment and the addition of infrastructures
.
On the left-hand side of the river, the residential Fix the agreement mistake
infrastructure
area
and the arts centre nearby were destroyed and replaced by the shopping centre and the new multi-screen cinema respectively. In addition
, a small car park was erected on the original site of the Derelict warehouses and the old town next to this
warehouses was Correct determiner usage
these
also
knocked down to make room for triangular
Add an article
the triangular
a triangular
area
of the offices and a new university. Meanwhile, the schools and the residential Fix the agreement mistake
areas
area
in the northwest corner stayed unchanged.
In
the opposite side, about half of the woodland Change preposition
On
area
was cut down and residential
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the residential
area
in
the north of Lakeside was Change preposition
on
also
demolished to make way for the huge extension of industrial
complex. At the same period, the lake at the beginning of the river was Add an article
an industrial
the industrial
also
narrowed into the
small pond.Correct article usage
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