Most
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people
think the
government
is spending
money
on
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crafts but some
people
argue that
this
money
should be better
to spendChange the verb form
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on
other Change the wording
another development sector
other development sectors
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development
sector. I will examine
this
essay that
this
money
should be used
to Change preposition
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elsewhere
.
Art
and craft is a creative sector. It
is playChange the verb form
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a vital role
forChange preposition
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peopleChange noun form
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mental
development
because it is one
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enjoyable leisure activity.
People
give their mind and eyes by seeing
art
exhibition which keeps our mind calm and active.
For instance
, many artists held craft and fashion
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every year in schools ,colleges and other places.
Besides
, enhance the beauty of
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mind and can gain various types of idea about fashion and
art
.
In addition
to
this
, artists need
fundFix the agreement mistake
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to arrange
art
programs.
However
, for developing our country
government
have to invest
money
onChange preposition
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roadsFix the agreement mistake
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and bridges construction, stipend , educational core , health sector , poor
fund
and so on.
Government
should build lots of
schoolFix the agreement mistake
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and colleges which is
mainChange the article
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side for
childrenChange noun form
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brain
development
because they are
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weaponFix the agreement mistake
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of our country's future establishment.
Moreover
,
governmentAdd an article
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should focus on poor
fund
and
their Correct pronoun usage
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health insurance. So my opinion is that
government
have to invest their
money
in
thisCorrect determiner usage
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sectors.
Besides
art
can be
student'sCorrect article usage
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quality activity.
In conclusion,
governmentAdd an article
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should not spend monetary
fundFix the agreement mistake
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on
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. They have to concentrate on
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side for
country'sCorrect article usage
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goodwill.