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In many countries, truancy* is a worrying problem for both parents and educators. What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?

#countries #truancy* #parents #educators #truancy #effects #child #community
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It is undeniable that the tendency of
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 who pretend to go to
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 yet are actually absent from
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 is a stressful issue for parents and teachers in many countries.
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 and the community. To start with, the reason for the truancy trend emerges is that some
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 feel a lack of entertainment in their homes.
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, some
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 will decide to pretend present in
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 but in fact, some the
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 go somewhere
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 as a play stations centre to entertain themself. One of my friends is a teacher in a certain high
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 in Jakarta, she told me the result of her interview section with some of her
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 who truanting regularly, it is true that they just need some time to relax because they have a limited time to do some leisure activities or entertaining themself with their hobbies after
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. Turning to possible effects, the consequence of absence in
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 will make some
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 miss a lot of tasks and lessons which can cause the possibility to fail their grade level. Continuing the testimony from my friend in the previous paragraph, she mentioned that almost 20% of
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 who leave
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 regularly underperformed academically.
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, poor academic results will
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 cause weak career growth for
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 in the future; it is unarguable that behaviour records and educational results will be assets that can bring someone easier getting hired or unlock promotions. On contrary, if
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 have bad performance and behaviour notes from their academic histories it can make society
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 as working space to see people's worth. As result, it can deliberately increase the number of people who are unemployed in society. In conclusion, it is unavoidable that the restriction of doing entertaining activities is one of the reasons why
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 decide to be truant
students
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. That trend inevitably can bring detrimental effects on
children
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 which can be a barrier to their career progression which unconsciously can be possibly a source of jobless in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • truancy
  • absenteeism
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • mental health
  • domestic problems
  • curriculum
  • juvenile delinquency
  • workforce
  • community cohesion
  • social activities
  • parental involvement
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • social isolation
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