Some people believe that acupuncture works .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The surgical team are using a 2000 method of controlling

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. Today,more and more of us are putting our faith

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medicine.

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ancient Chinese treatment is now one of the most popular of all alternative therapies. Millions of people are convinced that

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works where conventional medicines fail. By

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,the energy fills the whole

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,so it is an effective painkiller. The doctor begins to visit the young

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woman

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feeling her pulse and looking

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her tongue. Basically, the glassballs

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shown can help the blood circles

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faster or help the blood

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through your

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. She said

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each specific point is supposed to

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different

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of the

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. After the process,she felt spaced and everything thing was feeling really tingly. Recording to one of the

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patients

patient's

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virus attack and half of his face was

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paralyzed

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after 5 treatments of

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acupuncture

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he got fine . Michelle Kimmons was a smoker

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because of health reasons

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as heart attacks or strokes she wanted to stop it,so she

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tried

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too. If they work

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, she should feel sick when she smokes.

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,it works. Meanwhile,the bill is

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third of the cost of

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medicine.It

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uses

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in open-heart surgery to

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released

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pain.

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of

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treatments of just thinking to fix the part of our

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,

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both fix and rebalance the whole

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. Maybe ,it could have been some other parts of the treatment except

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as having that kind of attention or

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down to relax properly,

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at least it works for osteoarthritis. Sufferers

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devided

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into 3 groups :1_true

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2_sham

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3_education control group By experiments the

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neuroscientists

discovered that when the needle impressed the brain in taking energies,the area of the brain affected by the deep needling was often called the

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limbic

systems

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. The discovery

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that parts of the pain deactivate by deep needling

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to superficial

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