The range and quality of food has been improved with the development of technology and scientific advance. Some people think it is good and others think it is harmful. Discuss two sides and give your opinion.

Food

play

and

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important role in our daily lives,

whithout

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without

food

we cannot survive, and some

food

nowadays improve the

quality

with the use scientific method which is good, but there are some

also

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who also

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argue because

the

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they

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think that

scientific

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the scientific

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method is harmful. In

this

essay

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i

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I

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will discuss my opinion

in

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on

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both sides.

Firstly

, many

food

companies now

sale

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processed foods, it is

a good

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good quality food

a portion of good quality food

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quality

food

, because

this

kind

of

food

is very easy to

cooked

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cook

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and if you are a working individual and very busy at work you can cook

this

kind

of

food

faster,

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example

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some parts of the country like to eat ready to eat

food

, what you will do is you only put the

food

in microwave oven and after 5 minutes you can it. Another example is some grocery stores,

the

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they

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have

ready to eat

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ready-to-eat

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pizza, you only heat the pizza in the microwave oven and you can eat it after a few minutes,

this

is very fast and

also

good

quality

.

However

, Some people argue

with

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against

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this

kind

of process, because

the

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they

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think

this

kind

of is very harmful

for

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to

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humans

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humans'

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health

,

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apply

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because it is not a natural process of foods.

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, many grocery store

sale

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sell

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frozen chicken,

that

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and that

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chicken

si

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is

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already frozen for how many months because some

food

scientest

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scientist

scientists

and

manufacturer

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manufacturers

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of that

food

put preservatives to make that chicken fresh for how many months. And in my opinion is not

good

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a good

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quality

for people to consume. In my conclusion and views, I believe that

development

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the development

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of

food

quality

nowadays is very vital to our daily lives,

However

, natural and traditional way of preserving the

food

that people eat or consume is

much

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a much

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better way, and good for our health.