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Tje bar chart below shows the percentages of different kinds of landfill waste in five different countries in 2010

Tje bar chart below shows the percentages of different kinds of landfill waste in five different countries in 2010
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The given graph illustrates the proportion of four distinctive kinds of dumped
waste
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 in a number of countries in the year 2010. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it seems evident that
while
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 except for
Bratistan
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, construction misuse accounted for the predominant share of all types, there was an opposite trend for the figure of garbage from agriculture. Regarding the column chart, it can be seen that electronic
waste
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 took up a considerable percentage, at 35% in Molovia and
Vatania
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, whilst
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 figure for
Atlantis
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 was 32%, 3% and 7% higher than that of Selenia and
Bratistan
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.
In contrast
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, the statistics of agricultural trash remained the smallest among the landfill
waste
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 and fluctuated over 5% in four countries Molovia,
Atlantis
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, Selenia and
Vatania
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.
However
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,
this
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 percentage significantly rocketed to 55% in
Bratistan
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, nearly four times higher than that of the other nations. Turning to household
waste
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, the second highest proportion in Molovia, at 34%, followed by Selenia with 29% and dropped to 25% and 15% respectively for
Atlantis
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,
Vatania
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 and
Bratistan
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.
In addition
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, there was a 20% volatility of electronic
waste
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 among all countries, from 5%, the smallest figure in
Bratistan
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 to 25% in
Atlantis
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 and
Vatania
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, bratistan, vatania, atlantis with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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