The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and chart provide information on the police
budget
and the expenditure, respectively, for the years 2017 and 2018.
While
the sources of income are National government, local taxes, and other sources like grants, the items of expenditure are salaries, technology, building, and transportation.
Overall
, it is clear from the table and charts that the
budget
relies on local taxes and the money spent on technology. Explicitly, a pie chart shows that there is a significant increase in the spending on technology to 14% from 8% in
the
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2018 and
also
a decrease in the amount of money spent on the salaries of the office from 75% to 69% in
the
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2018. And there is no change in expenditure on buildings and transport, 17% same as in the previous year.
According to
the table, the majority of the local taxes in the
budget
have increased to 102.3m from 91.2m in the year 2018. The national government were increased to 177.8m
while
other sources to 38.5m which in total brings the total to an increase of 13.9% from the previous
budget
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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