The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The first bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who have a

computer

from 2002 to 2010,

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second one shows data about personal

computer

ownership by the stage of education for the same period.

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, it is obvious that the number of computers increased steadily

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period which is easily compared with education level. The personal

computer

figures raised relatively from approximately 55 per cent in 2002 to around 75% in 2010. From the second

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we can see that the percentage of

computer

ownership depends on the qualifications of the individual.

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, people who do not even

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high school (40

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) have the least number at 15 % and,

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postgraduate students

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% own the vast

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at over 70.

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the information from the bar chart the high school graduates