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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Write at least 250 words.

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One of the timidest and most serious issues that have arisen in modern society is the issue of
immigration
. It is a source of problems that need to be addressed.
Immigration
 has a powerful impact on society.
This
 is the socio-economic phenomenon that few
people
 bypass. The phenomenon of the movement of
people
 from one place of residence to another has become most acute in modern times. Before, few
people
 cared about movement, and few could influence
due to
 weak border control. Now, the borders are heavily guarded, and the primarily illegal
immigration
 of
people
 is causing resentment among the government. The primary and foremost reason for
immigration
 has been and is economic difficulties in the homeland.
As a result
,
people
 are forced to leave their homes and friends for food and a better life for themselves and their families in another country. Often,
due to
 illegal
immigration
, these
people
 are hired as cheap workers who are paid significantly less than ordinary workers and live very poorly.
As a result
, their standard of living declines, and they often cannot find work. Workers,
on the other hand
, are fired from their jobs, and,
as a result
, they blame immigrants for the loss of their jobs,
although
 the immigrants themselves have an unenviable standard of living
due to
 poor earnings. In conclusion,
immigration
, which is often illegal, is driven by economic and social distress that forces
people
 to leave their homes and travel to another country where they are almost always treated unfairly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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