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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It is thought that fathers and mothers ought to encourage their
kids
 how to be satisfactory partners in society.
While
 others believe that academies had better teach
this
.In my ,opinion both statements play an important role in
children
’s entity.In
this
 ,essay my views and thoughts will be ensured. In commence,
children
 should be taught to be
an
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agreeable
members
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 of the general public parents.Because today is a nice partner of society abet
children
 in any way.
Firstly
,youngsters are able to develop their interpersonal skills
such
 as leadership, communication and etc.
However
 in
this
 case there is almost not any influence on parents.
Secondly
,
kids
 do everything
that is
 demanded.For ,instance Kazakh has a citation “what you saw in your home,you will use it when you fly”.I mean,if parents are eager to teach their
children
,in future that kid will not be bad.To my mind,it is obvious that family builders play some part in youngsters’ entity.
On the other hand
,school is the place where should be taught
kids
 how to be satisfactory members of the general public.Because
children
 who are between 6-18 years,they study at special places.
Firstly
,all teachers at school always tell us “you ought to abet a person who needs help”.In doing so,we can be good partners in society.
Secondly
,today volunteering jobs are becoming more and more the
last
 five years.
In contrast
,even if we clean our environment of rubbish,we can bravely tell someone
i
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 am a satisfactory member of the general public. In conclusion,both views are key to bringing heir and play an important role in
kids
' entity
Submitted by 29th of april on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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