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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates information about the proportion of the global population among five different
age
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 groups in Iceland, from 1990 to 2020.
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, it can be seen clearly that it was an upward trend for people with
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 25-54,
while
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 the older
group
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 had the opposite pattern. Another interesting point is the trends of the younger
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group
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 remained stable over the
period
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 given.
To begin
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it is clear that
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 the population of the 25-54
age
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group
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 started at about 31% in 1990,
then
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 it rose significantly and reached almost 50%
at the end
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 of the
period
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, which meant that
this
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age
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group
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 had the highest rate among other groups over the
period
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 shown.
However
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, people aged under 24 showed downward trends. Regarding the 15-24
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group
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, after the percentage began at just above 20%, the figure
then
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 decreased slightly in the following years and reached under 10% in 2020. As ,regards the elderly
group
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 (
age
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 above 54), which at just about 10% accounted for the lowest percentage at the beginning of the
period
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 and the figure stayed constant after the following years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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