Student should pay their full University fees themselves as they benefits from having University studies and not the society as a whole to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, most people believe that students are the ones that

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benefits from a

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education

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, so it's their duty to pay for

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rather than as a whole

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. I totally disagree with

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statement and the following paragraph Will provide the reasons for that.

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, it is a social obligation for

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to pay taxes for

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so that it can help the

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to progress.

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if the public pay for the

education

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of students , it can assist the

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to have more educated individuals

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different sectors like engineering , health and law ,

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, it can help to enhance the living standards of the community.

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, countries like Australia and Sweden are providing student loans to scholars

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, they can have a literate

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; which can help the

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in every aspect.

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, it is obvious that most families cannot afford to pay the full amount of tuition fee for a

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. We can see that most scholars are from middle-class families, where most parents do normal jobs like driving, electricians or a farmer, most of the earnings were spent on living like house loans or insurance

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, providing a huge sum of money for their children for

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is going to be a big task for them.

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, if

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equally

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the expense of

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then

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, it can help them to send their children to famous

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so that they can be educated and

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, they only need to pay

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the amount of

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fees.

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it is clear that

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affording a full amount of tuition fee is going to be a huge burden for students because most of them are from middle-class families .

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, it is the social responsibility

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the community to pay taxes for

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so that , it can increase the economy of the

nation

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