You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Mam, I hope you are doing well. I am Sathish Raghumani (Savings Bank account holder, A/c no 567257948) reaching out to you regarding a

not delivered

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cheque book I ordered

couple

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of weeks ago. I didn't expect

this

bad service from your bank, and I wanted to make a

complain

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about the bad service I received. I have tried calling your customer support for

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long but

unfortunately

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after

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10 minutes of long wait my calls are getting

disconected

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disconnected

automatically, So, I kindly request you to resolve

this

issue for me at your earliest

convinence

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convenience

. As I mentioned earlier I

have

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ordered my

cheqe

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cheque

couple

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of weeks ago on 2nd

july

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July

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. I was promised to receive my cheque within 5

bussiness

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business

days but, it's been already 2 weeks and I haven't received my order yet. Kindly get back to me with

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exact timeline of when will I be getting my

Cheque book

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. I request you to take

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necessary action in

this

matter to avoid

such

problems in future. For any

further

enquire

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contact me through

this

number (XXXXXXXXXXX). Yours Faithfully, Sathish Raghumani

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that your paragraphs each contain a single, clear idea. For instance, separate your complaint about the service from the details of your order.

task achievement

Double-check for minor language errors and typos to enhance clarity and professionalism. For instance, 'enquire' should be 'inquiries' and 'convinence' should be 'convenience'.

suitable writing tone

Your letter has a clear and appropriate tone to address a formal complaint.

complete response

The letter communicates all the necessary information effectively, ensuring the manager has all the details needed to address your issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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