Some people think that parents have a powerful influence in child’s life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child’s development. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Though parents have

a

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good control over their

children

,they tend to learn from their surroundings.Which is directly connected to their upbringing.I completely agree with

this

statement because kids spend most of their time outside

instead

of at

home

. First and foremost, infants

are

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love to mimic other characters and they learn many

things

from their

friends

.

In other words

, a child spends most of the time with

friends

, which helps him or her to advocate his friend's behaviour.

For example

, if a child

go

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school and make

friends

that might alter his behaviour .Because

friends

have a greater effect on

children

's behaviour.

Secondly

, there are many

things

to know which can't be acquired by seating at

home

.Without coming outside we can't learn communication, humanity, honesty etc.To be precise,when

children

are out of the

home

they meet with many individuals and it assists them to learn communication.

Moreover

,

children

are able to gather a variety of knowledge from society.

For instance

, whatever good or bad happened in

the

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society

children

see these and have an idea about right and wrong.That helps him or her to be a good person.

Apart from

this

, many

children

often go in the wrong way with bad influences from outside. In conclusion, parents can teach a lot of knowledgeable

things

by seating their

children

at

home

but there is plenty of

things

which can't learn at

home

.

That is

why I believe that

children

have a great effect on their upbringing from the outside.They learn more from

outside

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rather than inside.