You live in rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why you need him/her to fix the problem right away - what needs to be done to fix it You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear John, I am a resident of the Revenue Parks Building, Apartment 109. I am writing

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letter to inform you that the storm that occurred

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night

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damaged all the windows and walls and it needs to be fixed urgently. Even though the heavy storm affected the entire building, most damages were on the west side of the apartment. All the window glasses are broken and the staircases to the balcony are

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damaged.

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, because of the continuous rains, water has started leaking through the roofs and the walls have cracks in them. It is extremely difficult for us to live in

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an environment, especially the children and the elderly. I kindly request you to contact the maintenance person and make the required arrangements for getting the materials.

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, the walls need to be sealed and repainted. It would be appreciated if you would pay immediate attention to

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matter. Yours Sincerely, Meenakshi

meenakshi.rvkmrTue Feb 28 2023

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coherence and cohesion

Maintain a more formal tone in the greeting and closing of the letter.

task response

Address all the points mentioned in the prompt more explicitly.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rental accommodation
landlord
caused the damage
bad weather
storm
heavy rain
strong winds
leaking roof
broken windows
damaged walls
urgent repairs
prevent further damage
ensure safety
maintain comfort
power outages
uninhabitable
structural damage
costly damages
qualified repair services

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