You live in rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why you need him/her to fix the problem right away - what needs to be done to fix it You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear John, I am a resident of the Revenue Parks Building, Apartment 109. I am writing
this
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letter to inform you that the storm that occurred
last
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night
had
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damaged all the windows and walls and it needs to be fixed urgently. Even though the heavy storm affected the entire building, most damages were on the west side of the apartment. All the window glasses are broken and the staircases to the balcony are
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damaged.
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, because of the continuous rains, water has started leaking through the roofs and the walls have cracks in them. It is extremely difficult for us to live in
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an environment, especially the children and the elderly. I kindly request you to contact the maintenance person and make the required arrangements for getting the materials.
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, the walls need to be sealed and repainted. It would be appreciated if you would pay immediate attention to
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matter. Yours Sincerely, Meenakshi
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coherence and cohesion
Maintain a more formal tone in the greeting and closing of the letter.
task response
Address all the points mentioned in the prompt more explicitly.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rental accommodation
  • landlord
  • caused the damage
  • bad weather
  • storm
  • heavy rain
  • strong winds
  • leaking roof
  • broken windows
  • damaged walls
  • urgent repairs
  • prevent further damage
  • ensure safety
  • maintain comfort
  • power outages
  • uninhabitable
  • structural damage
  • costly damages
  • qualified repair services
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