The bar charts give data on noise levels by day and by night in rural and urban areas in Europe

The bar charts give data on noise levels by day and by night in rural and urban areas in Europe
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These bar charts show the percentage of European citizens exposed to roar in metropolitan regions
as well as
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in villages in 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Traffic was the most annoying all day and night irrespective of the region where people live. In the daytime , Traffic jams had
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most influence both in major cities and in rural areas,
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However
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the population affected in the city was twice as much as those in the village.
This
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trend continues to be expressed in the evening. The figures were
however
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less at that time reaching 48% and 24% for major and small areas respectively. Train-caused buzz was a less common disturbance. It varied slightly over 24 hours, In
fact
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almost the same population were affected in both regions ranging from 6% at night in the village to 10% in big cities. Aircraft and factories did not contribute so much to making blasts in Europe.Only 4% of the daytime was affected in the city
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industry did not cause any disturbance in peripheral areas.

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