Nowadays many people have an unhealthy diet and do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons behind this trend? How can we encourage these people to live a healthy lifestyle?
Health plays an important role in every person’s life. There is a common phrase that “health is wealth”,
“Healthy
body makes a healthy mind”. Most people have Correct word choice
and “Healthy
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
lifestyle
and they do not Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
exercise
regularly. There are numerous reasons for this
, and I will discuss the same in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, the main reason for unhealthy
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an unhealthy
lifestyle
is that everyone is very busy in this
hectic lifestyle
that they don’t have time to look on
their diet, so they prefer to order outside and eat as its easy rather than cooking the Change preposition
at
food
. Other
reason is taste so all Change the wording
Another
wants
tasty Change the verb form
want
food
and unhealthy food
are tastier. For example
, about 80% of youngsters eat burgers and fast food
as its
tasty and easier to buy.
To encourage these people, it should start Replace the word
it's
it is
withing
from family. Parents should make Correct your spelling
within
food
at home as these parents don’t have time to make food
, so they order online, and
which Correct word choice
apply
encourage
Correct subject-verb agreement
encourages
children
to do the same. Schools should teach children
about benefits
of good health and Correct article usage
the benefits
doing
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apply
exercise
every day. They should assignment
time about from Replace the word
assign
there
studies to do Correct your spelling
their
exercise
. For example
, it’s evident that children
learn
move quickly in school by looking Add the particle
tolearn
other
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at other
children
. Government should also
hold Add an article
a campaign
campaign
to spread awareness among Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
individual
.
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individuals
To conclude
, it’s hard to change the people
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people's
lifestyle
but it’s not impossible if everyone will come forward and do the task from there
end, we will be able to overcome Correct your spelling
their
from
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apply
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
lifestyle
. Everyone should be motivated in Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
schools
and works to do Fix the agreement mistake
school
exercise
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