Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and trainees rather than to benefit them as individuals
Some people think that goal of the
school
is to help children in becoming good citizens
and trainees instead
of benefitting them as an individual. Although
Good citizens
can't contribute much to the development of the country
, a good individual can contribute.In my ,opinion school
should help students
to become better as individuals
rather than turning them into good citizens
.
The greatest advantage of benefiting them as individuals
is they will contribute towards the development of the country
.A good entrepreneur can generate millions of jobs and feed millions of families.The school
needs to help them to grow as individuals
later on society will benefit from it.For example
,Bill Gates co-founded Microsoft which is contributing towards the US economy later on bill gates donated his wealth to help the whole world for different causes.The school
helped him to grow as an individual ,in addition
, helped him to code on the computer later on with his coding skills he created windows which is a product of Microsoft, therefore
Good individuals
always help the country
.
The disadvantage of schools turning students
into just good citizens
is they will never question their state
because schools are just focused on them becoming good citizens
.A good citizen will never ask a question from his state
.Asking questions is the backbone of democracy and individuals
can just obey everything without even asking a question.State
's adversaries can take use these kinds of individuals
against the state
for instance
,In Pakistan 14 years old teenagers are joining terrorist groups and fighting against the state
they are being brainwashed with this
false information however
, and they even don't know what they are doing the are being told this
good for the state
, in reality, it is not.Thus
just good citizen is not good for the country
and society.
To sum up
, the Purpose of its schools is to turn students
is too good citizens
instead
of helping them grow as individuals
that is
what some people say but it has serious consequences just converting students
into good citizens
furthermore
Society greatly benefits from excellent individuals
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