There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Do you think the traditional music of a country is more important and should it be preserved or international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society?

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has become an important aspect
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human beings.
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use
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to express their feelings or to relieve their level of stress from work. In my point of view,
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has a benefit for
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nowadays, I believe it is
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important to keep traditional
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as a heritage from
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in the past.
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plays an important role for many
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the expression of feelings and helps
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to maintain their mental health.
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in the past used
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in some celebrations.
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used to play some drum
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and sang salutations to celebrate the birth of their prophet.
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, some
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genres like R&B, rock, and classical affect
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's preferences to hear
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. They used to hear those kinds kind of
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in their leisure time or to relax after they did a job in the workplace.
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has a crucial impact
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people
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's life.
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, despite
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today prefer to listen to modern
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, I believe traditional
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must be preserved
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it represents
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the history
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of the cultures of
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in the past. Modern
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gives a
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sensation
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people
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when they listen to it.
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,
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in the past have so
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traditional
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music
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that must be considered
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preserved
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.
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, Indonesia has many thrives and each of them
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their
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own
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because of that many
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interested
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to come to Indonesia. If the Government did not preserve
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culture
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,
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nowadays will
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not know about history.
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,
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should preserve the traditional
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To sum up
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, some
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used
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in celebration and they listen to it to maintain their mental health after work.
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people
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today prefer to
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modern
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, it is important for
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the government
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to keep their traditional
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as a heritage from
people
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in the past.
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