The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The given diagram illustrates how plastic
bottles
are recycled. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
this
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process
involves nine steps , from collecting used plastic to Use synonyms
the
manufacturing Correct article usage
apply
of
recycled products.
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To begin
with the Linking Words
process
, all the used Use synonyms
bottles
are brought to the collection points by customers, Use synonyms
then
they are taken to recycling plants by a truck before being sorted in that factory. Linking Words
Next,
the recyclable Linking Words
bottles
are compressed into large blocks b a high-pressurized system, and the unqualified Use synonyms
bottles
are Use synonyms
then
removed. After that, these compressed blocks are crushed by a crushing machine into small pieces which are Linking Words
subsequently
cleaned through a tank of water to remove any residue.
The next stages involve transformation into a reusable material. The pieces of plastic are fed into a machine which turns them into pellets. Afterwards, these pellets are heated pellets to from raw material. At the Linking Words
last
stage of the Linking Words
process
, from raw materials, people produce plenty of products Use synonyms
such
as clothes, Linking Words
bottles
, school tools, etc.
The above items are recyclable and the recycling Use synonyms
process
will Use synonyms
also
be repeated, they take place as a cycle.Linking Words
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